Analysis of Quiet One. Park Bench.



She refuses eye contact
Much too shy and
wounded in the past.
A bench in the shade.
A magazine up and down.
Smiles so subtle
And frequent.
As two little boys
Turn a swing gym
Into noisy battlefield.
Complete with screams, falls
And rat tat tat.

Two sundress girls
Rehearse the latest
News having passed
Six year old ears.
A June Sun
Observes as well
And enlivens.
The woman’s
Countenance glows.
Mouth moving oddly.
Oh that’s it
She’s praying.
Probably for those kids.
Hands folded on her lap.
Young Widow.


Scheme XXAXXXXBXXXX XXAXXXXBXXXXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 101011 1110 10001 01001 010101 1110 010 11101 1011 011010 01111 0111 111 01010 1101 1111 011 0111 0010 01 1001 11010 111 110 100111 110101 110
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 516
Words 108
Sentences 14
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 12, 15
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 199
Words per stanza (avg) 45

About this poem

Reminds me of Hannah in First Samuel. Chapter one and verses 5-17.

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Written on June 12, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on June 12, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on June 12, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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