Analysis of The Men of the Deep



The Men of the Deep

It’s a job at least
Only one around
And it starts in dark
Leading to the Dark
As the Cage lets out
complaining sounds.

Will the runs stay clear
Of gas?
Will the passages
All hold fast.
Will my Buddies
Do their bit
As rock is blown?

Others shake their heads
At me.
Wondering, other jobs
Might be.
But the dark, the shaft
The hoppers
Are my own.

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Scheme X XXAAXX XXXXXXB XCXCXXB X
Poetic Form
Metre 01101 10111 10101 01101 10101 10111 0101 10111 11 10100 111 1110 111 1111 10111 11 100101 11 10101 010 111 1100101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 456
Words 101
Sentences 11
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 7, 7, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 60
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Written on June 12, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on June 12, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on June 12, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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