Analysis of The Haunting Hour”



“The Haunting Hour”

In the haunting hour of morning;
thoughts of you can’t be resisted
As before a new day’s dawning;
longing shore begs moonbeam kisses

Dreamt hands upon my body graze;
I feel my skin flush warm to cold
It is the longest hour of day;
I lie awake within its hold

Upon my open window’s sill;
in softest light of starry skies
Is perched a seagull, hushed and still;
a look of sorrow in his eyes

I wonder if he’s lost his way;
- for his nest mate does he pine?
I whisper kindly he may stay;
another roost he need not find

But off he took in moonlight dim;
without a word before he flew
Perhaps it’s I who needed him-
Perhaps it’s I, in need of you


Scheme X AXAX XBCB DEDE CXCX FGFG
Poetic Form
Metre 01010 001010110 11111010 10101110 1011110 11011101 11111111 110101011 11010111 01110101 01011101 1101101 01110011 11011111 1111111 11010111 01011111 1111011 01010111 01111101 01110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 684
Words 147
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

This poem addresses feelings about love lost, or love only dreamed about. The seagull may be seen as a symbol of this love, and all the emotions it evokes.

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Written on September 24, 2023

Submitted by susan.brumel on September 25, 2023

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Susan Mayer Brumel

I am a retired hospice social worker, who began writing poems about 2 years ago. I am married, a mom of two sons, a Bernese Mountain Dog, and grandma of two grandchildren who are the loves of my life. A lover of all animals and most people, I enjoy spending time in nature, long walks, and reading Pablo Neruda, Blake, William Carlos Williams, James Joyce, Mary Oliver, Emily Dickinson, Maya Angelou, Leonard Cohen, and more. Baudelaire tells us to ‘be drunk’ on something every day; I am drunk on poetry and intend never to be sober! more…

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