The Haunting Hour”



“The Haunting Hour”


In the haunting hour of morning;
thoughts of you can’t be resisted
As before a new day’s dawning;
longing shore begs moonbeam kisses

Dreamt hands upon my body graze;
I feel my skin flush warm to cold
It is the longest hour of day;
I lie awake within its hold

Upon my open window’s sill;
in softest light of starry skies
Is perched a seagull, hushed and still;
a look of sorrow in his eyes

I wonder if he’s lost his way;
- for his nest mate does he pine?
I whisper kindly he may stay;
another roost he need not find

But off he took in moonlight dim;
without a word before he flew
Perhaps it’s I who needed him-
Perhaps it’s I, in need of you

About this poem

This poem addresses feelings about love lost, or love only dreamed about. The seagull may be seen as a symbol of this love, and all the emotions it evokes.

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Written on September 24, 2023

Submitted by susan.brumel on September 25, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X AXAX XBCB DEDE CXCX FGFG
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 684
Words 147
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Susan Mayer Brumel

I am a retired hospice social worker, who began writing poems about 2 years ago. I am married, a mom of two sons, a Bernese Mountain Dog, and grandma of two grandchildren who are the loves of my life. A lover of all animals and most people, I enjoy spending time in nature, long walks, and reading Pablo Neruda, Blake, William Carlos Williams, James Joyce, Mary Oliver, Emily Dickinson, Maya Angelou, Leonard Cohen, and more. Baudelaire tells us to ‘be drunk’ on something every day; I am drunk on poetry and intend never to be sober! more…

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