Analysis of The Innocents

Wai Mun Fong 1959 (Singapore)



We are not strangers to war,
but how it feels this time.
I don’t know what to do,
I have no place to go. I
have no strength left
to pull myself together
I cannot find the words.
Still, I must find the words.


Scheme ABCDEFGG
Poetic Form
Metre 1111011 111111 111111 1111111 1111 111010 110101 111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 225
Words 52
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 156
Words per stanza (avg) 44

About this poem

This poem speaks of our fragility especially in times of conflict (as is happening now in the Middle East and Ukraine), and yet how we find comfort and some light from words, either written, spoken or sung.

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Written on October 26, 2023

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Wai Mun Fong

I am a retired academic who now spends time writing poetry and blogging on topics covering the arts and sciences. My poetry touches on nature and aspects of the human condition. They include haiku, though most are in western free-verse form. I try to write poems that are relatively brief, using simple language in the interest of accessibility. more…

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