Analysis of Coma
Bandages wrapped on my forehead
Lamplight piercing eyelids while shut
Fact I sense light am I alive and not dead
Unable to move at all maybe not
Sound of voices near me are sad
Unable to speak can't respond
Deep in a coma I'm feeling mad
I want to wake up from beyond
| Scheme | AXAX BCBC |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | Quatrain (50%) |
| Metre | 10011110 110111 11111101011 0101111101 11101111 01011101 100101101 11111101 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 268 |
| Words | 54 |
| Sentences | 1 |
| Stanzas | 2 |
| Stanza Lengths | 4, 4 |
| Lines Amount | 8 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
| Words per line (avg) | 7 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 107 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 27 |
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Written on November 08, 2023
Submitted on November 08, 2023
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