Analysis of Only if...



When I die if I make it to Heaven
I hope God will listen to me
I'll ask to be forgiven
For writing intolerable poetry

I know my request is insignificant
There are greater sins bearing forgiveness
Maybe can or maybe can't
Even though I'm willing to confess


Scheme ABAB XXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 1111111110 11111011 1111010 11001000100 1110110100 1110110010 1011101 101110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 256
Words 49
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 24

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Even after life requests make a difference.

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Written on November 14, 2023

Submitted on November 14, 2023

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