Analysis of Nature of War
“Nature of War”
I kindled my Sabbath candles,
as sun set behind the wood
Peace of golden respite shattered,
as only death screams could
Perhaps a fox, or gentle fawn
was ambushed by coyote-
Her desperate cries in darkness,
sent terror shooting through me
Looking from an opened window,
I begged him, go away!
Too impassioned though to hear me,
he clawed harder into prey
Waning light of candles flickered,
but by quickened breaths was stoked
I prayed her suffering would end,
that swift mercy be invoked…
But her whimpers, like damp breezes
weave through autumn’s dying leaves,
still call to me as rising suns
cast shadows on the trees
Scheme | X XABA XCXC XDCD BEXE XXXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1011 11011010 1110101 11101010 110111 01011101 111010 0101010 1101011 10111010 111101 10101111 1110011 10111010 1110111 11010011 1110101 1011110 111101 11111101 11101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 649 |
Words | 124 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 21 |
Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 85 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 18 |
About this poem
As I wrote this poem describing an animal attacking another at the very moment I was lighting my Sabbath candles, I realized it was a metaphor describing the suffering of innocents caught in the crossfires of war.
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