Analysis of Nature of War



“Nature of War”

I kindled my Sabbath candles,
as sun set behind the wood
Peace of golden respite shattered,
as only death screams could

Perhaps a fox, or gentle fawn
was ambushed by coyote-
Her desperate cries in darkness,
sent terror shooting through me

Looking from an opened window,
I begged him, go away!
Too impassioned though to hear me,
he clawed harder into prey

Waning light of candles flickered,
but by quickened breaths was stoked
I prayed her suffering would end,
that swift mercy be invoked…

But her whimpers, like damp breezes
weave through autumn’s dying leaves,
still call to me as rising suns
cast shadows on the trees


Scheme X XABA XCXC XDCD BEXE XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 11011010 1110101 11101010 110111 01011101 111010 0101010 1101011 10111010 111101 10101111 1110011 10111010 1110111 11010011 1110101 1011110 111101 11111101 11101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 649
Words 124
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

As I wrote this poem describing an animal attacking another at the very moment I was lighting my Sabbath candles, I realized it was a metaphor describing the suffering of innocents caught in the crossfires of war.

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Written on October 19, 2023

Submitted by susan.brumel on November 29, 2023

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Susan Mayer Brumel

I am a retired hospice social worker, who began writing poems about 2 years ago. I am married, a mom of two sons, a Bernese Mountain Dog, and grandma of two grandchildren who are the loves of my life. A lover of all animals and most people, I enjoy spending time in nature, long walks, and reading Pablo Neruda, Blake, William Carlos Williams, James Joyce, Mary Oliver, Emily Dickinson, Maya Angelou, Leonard Cohen, and more. Baudelaire tells us to ‘be drunk’ on something every day; I am drunk on poetry and intend never to be sober! more…

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