Analysis of Sometime Someday



When two souls look for the same thing
life is abound with changes from the heart.

It’s not the relationship of two but the meaning
of friendship that endures apart.

Common grounds should never be crossed for the souls of respect.

O’ how one wonders where thee would command her thoughts are kept.

Could it be with the heart of her soul or the curiosity of how life is flourished so sudden.

For he is caught in the swirl of destiny, to come, to rest in a wave of storms that have sunken.

Should his soul keep being beaten or should the soul wait for the clouds to open.

Now that his heart is lost for the soft sounds of her voice, the gentleness of her soul unbroken.

O’ where should faith be! In the open, out of control to sway.

Friends always within the heart, souls lost to be away.

Reaching for insanity to be the one.
Sometime Someday.


Scheme AB AB X X C C C C D D CD
Poetic Form
Metre 11111011 1101110101 110010111010 11010101 10111011101101 11110111010111 111101101100100111110110 111100111001111001111110 1111101011011101110 11111110111010100101010 111110010110111 110101111101 10101001101 11
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 865
Words 182
Sentences 13
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 47
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 60
Words per stanza (avg) 15

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Two souls reaching for each other.

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Written on October 14, 2023

Submitted by Sez on November 20, 2023

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