Analysis of Avouer

Eric Morales 1998 (Palmdale, CA)



Oh, how forbidden are the rings to touch Saturn,
And so too is my voice unable to express.
To compliment your beautiful hair of auburn,
And to let all of these emotions out in excess.

A cursed passion that I'm unable to profess,
Frail is this soul to endure another mourning,
But it will break if you too don't ever confess.
To have you by my side is all I've been coursing,

To wake up and see your blithe gaze every morning,
Will make my heart melt like gold on that perfect flame.
To have my goddess' kiss will be rewarding,
Like the taste of morphine that casts away the pain.

And although I fell in love for you long ago,
Maybe one day I will let you finally know.


Scheme ABAB BCBC CXCX DD
Poetic Form
Metre 111001011110 011111010101 110011001110 011111010101 011011010101 111110101010 111111111001 111111111110 1110111110010 111111111011 11110111010 101110110101 01110111101 101111111001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 674
Words 146
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 130
Words per stanza (avg) 33

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Love poem about a crush

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Submitted by Váli on January 10, 2024

Modified by Váli on January 10, 2024

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Eric Morales

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