Analysis of SOLDIER'S TALE



If you've never been there
I'm not sure that you'll see
The smell of smoke in the air
And bullets flying right past me
And right then, in my darkest hour
God's Grace hits me with His power

I saw my friends  fall down
And some won't ever rise again
Silent prayer, the bloody ground
Don't know if dry tears will end
But even as I fire my own gun
I heard God say, I'm with you my son

So much pain, I wish to forget
How can I ever make you see
The tears I couldn't let go yet
‘Cause the bullets were seeking me
See the enemy in my sights
There on so many different nights

Far in a foreign place I never knew
Got to fight on, only way to get out
I'm not sure words will ever show you
World's are shattered at a rifles shout
And as the rifles, at last silent fell
So did my tears, like from a hidden well

I guess my heart shattered that day
And sometimes my mind as well
But over time I relearned to pray
And so our story I'll try and tell
I can say, if you've never been there
Fall down and lift a thankful prayer


Scheme ABABCC XXXXDD EBEBFF GHGHII JIJIAA
Poetic Form
Metre 111011 111111 0111001 01010111 011011010 11111110 111111 01110101 1010101 1111111 1101110111 111111111 11111101 11110111 01110111 10100101 10100011 111101001 1001011101 1111101111 111111011 111010101 0101011101 1111110101 11111011 0011111 11011111 0110101101 111111011 11010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,035
Words 220
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 155
Words per stanza (avg) 42

About this poem

War. It's the depths of mans evil and failure of community. Sometimes it's necessary to fight, even noble to fight, but there's nothing noble on any battlefield as men tear each other apart. Remember our price, paid for in the lives of the fallen and the soul's of the veterans. Our stares are of sights far beyond our ability to share,be thankful for that. For fallen friends

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Written on April 15, 2024

Submitted by crucifiedinhim2 on April 15, 2024

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