Analysis of PLEASE DELIVER



I'm in the fire, I can't see
What You're purifying in me
So much pain, such a trial
Trudging mile after mile
My trials, Lord, are a River
I call out, Lord please deliver

I've seen the path of pain
Trial that leaves nothing to gain
Jesus I call out to you now
As all my enemies growl
Yes my fear causes me to shiver
I call out, Lord please deliver

I've run the race, Lord to win
I've laid to the Cross my sin
Yet the hits keep on coming
The drummers keep drumming
The Devil's shot his entire quiver
I call out, Lord please deliver

I can't go on, Jesus I'm tired
In the muck I'm truly mired
But you are still my Holy Light
I will follow through this night
My trials are a mighty river
I call out, Lord please deliver
Amen


Scheme aaxxbB ccxxbB ddeebB xxffbBx
Poetic Form
Metre 10010111 1110001 1111010 101101 11011010 11111010 110111 10111011 10111111 1111001 111101110 11111010 1101111 1110111 1011110 010110 0101101010 11111010 111110110 0011101 11111101 1110111 110101010 11111010 01
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 747
Words 161
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 7
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 139
Words per stanza (avg) 37

About this poem

The Lord will rescue me from every evil attack and will bring me safely to his heavenly kingdom. To him be glory for ever and ever. Amen. 2Timothy 4:18

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Written on April 16, 2024

Submitted by crucifiedinhim2 on April 17, 2024

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