Analysis of Nelam cries moonlit night
Nelam watches silenty the pains of falling rain
Sweet,sweet,sylvan air
Wind is caught in your hair
Your nipples lit with desire
Your lips quaver w/ passion of orgasmic
tears;your hip sways in love rhythmic prayers
O Nelam your love-molten-lava gush out setting us
on fire
Yet alas!the hunger still lingers
You`ve yet remaineth so uncharted,undiscovered
Leaf falls one by one;your ebonized-breasts
melt my fingers;you move,you moan,you utter
the letters of love that our youngen flesh
flutter in the moonlit air of love and desire
leaf falls one by one;twilight-zone stretches
to new-dawn;your milky malls,silky shawl
mesmerizes all nuns and monks
O Nelam you keep crucifixing me in your love-lipped
limbic sink;our loveliQuid inundates all
Beirut,Bethlehem,Rome,Venice,O my stolen bliss!
Scheme | ABBCDEFCGHICJCKLMHLN |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 1101011101 11 111011 11011010 11101001011 11101101 1111101011101 110 1110110 11111 1111111 1111110 0101111011 100011110010 11111110 1111011 11101 1111110111 11111 11101 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 768 |
Words | 135 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 20 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 32 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 645 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 118 |
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Submitted on June 12, 2010
Modified on March 05, 2023
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