Analysis of Nelam cries moonlit night



Nelam watches silenty the pains of falling rain
Sweet,sweet,sylvan air
Wind is caught in your hair
Your nipples lit with desire
Your lips quaver w/ passion of orgasmic
tears;your hip sways in love rhythmic prayers
O Nelam your love-molten-lava gush out setting us
on fire
Yet alas!the hunger still lingers
You`ve yet remaineth so uncharted,undiscovered
Leaf falls one by one;your ebonized-breasts
melt my fingers;you move,you moan,you utter
the letters of love that our youngen flesh
flutter in the moonlit air of love and desire
leaf falls one by one;twilight-zone stretches
to new-dawn;your milky malls,silky shawl
mesmerizes all nuns and monks
O Nelam you keep crucifixing me in your love-lipped
limbic sink;our loveliQuid inundates all
Beirut,Bethlehem,Rome,Venice,O my stolen bliss!


Scheme ABBCDEFCGHICJCKLMHLN
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1101011101 11 111011 11011010 11101001011 11101101 1111101011101 110 1110110 11111 1111111 1111110 0101111011 100011110010 11111110 1111011 11101 1111110111 11111 11101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 768
Words 135
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 645
Words per stanza (avg) 118
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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