Analysis of The Race



Sweaty frown, hovering endless ground,
Twixt parallel pure trails, glory bound;
Crimson flowers lie away in shade,
Welcoming untempted eyes of solid jade;
Clapping and cheering evade the air,
Deadened by the athlete's ever sharp stare;
Straight and narrow is the numbered path chosen
To the golden horizon - nearby, unbroken ...


Scheme AABBCCDD
Poetic Form
Metre 101100101 11011101 101010101 100111101 100100101 11011011 10101010110 101001011010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 321
Words 51
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 263
Words per stanza (avg) 52
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Submitted on December 10, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Shane Bowman

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