As you..
Everything turns grey around
me, a starving being;
as you disengage your hands
from these craving hands of mine.
Two colours unrepetantly mixed
forming a new shade
everyone got fascinated, only I
saw the pain of leaving the genuineness.
Human writes to stars,
"Why do you break?"
it whispers, "It makes the happy,
and I want them smile."
You disappeared, leaving a note that I
need no one, as I'm smiling on my own.
But my dear, you aren't a star,
but that moon, which gives me peace.
About this poem
Thiss is not a love you poem purely, but can be read as one, confessing his/her feelings.
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Written on October 16, 2021
Submitted by jubiyakhatoon on October 16, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | XXXX XXAX XXXX AXXX |
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 490 |
Words | 92 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4 |
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