Poem in the sea

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



The sea has took you so long ago
And I don't remember you at all
Sometimes you are read by the mermaids
And the shoals
But I don't remember you at all
Sometimes it hurts when another is set free to be in a world of eternity
So I don't remember you at all
You're so hidden by stars I can hardly feel that's why I don't remember you at all
I know you need me and that you care
Sure. I don't remember you at all
I feel that the tears have begun to tare
How I don't remember you at all
That the heart you carry is drowning in wishes big and small
Though I don't remember you at all
I hate myself sometimes anall
But I don't remember you at all
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Written on September 16, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on September 16, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme abcdBebbfbfbbbbB
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 641
Words 136
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16

Heather Lydia Thornhill

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