Fictional Umbrella



Do you really have to be that honest?

Did I even mean anything to you? Please say yes...

I'll see you holding an umbrella for someone else

While I say "adorable" with a smiling face

I smile, while it rains, I am in pain

But there really wasn't something for me to gain

The word "best friend" didn't really suit us

Maybe we were meant to end.

And maybe I always was your second option,

Well, I at least hoped someday I was your first

And now you are somebody else, with dreams

And I'm stuck forever, with a foolish grin

I wouldn't even try to blame you

If I was you, I would hate me too

I hesitate to talk, what if I might not be of your worth?

What if you too find me stupid, maybe you already do

And I would be as faint as a fairy's wings

I would suddenly disappear without no evidence

So if you are seeing this, I promise

I was always supposed to be the loneliest me

About this poem

This poem says, how a childhood friend who was replaced by her bestfriend, despite of trying to be with them forever, she was hated, she saw their "bestfriend" hold hands with other people, smile with them, laugh with them, leaving her to walk alone...

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Written on September 23, 2022

Submitted by adreejabiswas10 on September 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X A X X B B A X X X X X C C X C X X X X
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 887
Words 199
Stanzas 20
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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