Pondering
Lying in my bed at night pondering my life
far to tired for walking now and way too drunk to drive
i keep looking at the bottle that sits on my night stand
I feel weak and unappreciated as it rattles in my hand
shaking like i was cold but pain is all I feel,
will i have the balls to follow through is this how cowards feel,
the releif I feel is fleeting and the solutionb is right here,
I pop the top quietly just so noone else will hear,
My wife is lying there asleep peaceful as she seems ,
just a couple hours ago she went crazy as she screamed
I guess I'm only dreaming to think I could be loved
I"m left with only painful thoughts knowing I'm not enough.
to many tortuous details to maention in this rift
I am lucky that she fell asleep she'd still be talking shit
the last 12 years Ive noticed that I dont know who I am
but she has made sure that I knew the place where which I stand
before when we were dating she was as sweet as she could be
we would walk around hand in hand she was proud of me.
I clutch the pills in my hand and lean back in the bath
reaching for the razor that will save me from her wrath,
I take a breath and swallow hard there is no coming back
I dont know if my battered heart can take 1 more attack.
I place the razor open on the side where towels are stacked
then take two dozen percocet and slipp down in the bath
After what seemed eternity I feel the numb I need
then slice my wrista hastily made jaged so to bleed.
as the water al;l turns crimson and the lights are getting dark
I hear a desperate daughters plea, daddy what's wrong with your arms.
I realize it was a mistake but tears flow down her cheeks
I tell her that Im sorry this is how it has to be.
Your mommy hurt me deeply dear and i dont have much time
I dont want to die alone wish I could press rewind.
Stay with me please dont go I plead with my little girl
the only reason that I had some joy in this cokld world.
Im so sorry that you saw this it was the cowards way
then I slip down in the tub as the light and feeling starts to fade
I see her lips are moviong and shes crying daddy no!
I try and hold out 1 more breath and say i love you so.
I see my self lying in blood soaked from head to toe
and watch her sob hytsterically still tugging at my clothes
Why oh why did I do this it was not my intent
shattered her heart, the angel that God himself had sent.
The only one that didnt care that I was getting old
couldnt bring myself to to give the letter I still hold.
I told her that Im proud of her, she could do anything
but daddy was to weak to stay i know how this mihght seem
I dont want you in any way to think this is your fault
youve given me the only happy times I can recall
I try and calm her 1 last time my hand goes through her face
then panic washes over me, as i realize its too late
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Written on September 21, 2023
Submitted by mark.andrews838686 on September 21, 2023
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Scheme | XX AA BB CC XX XX XX XA DD EE FF XE GG XX XD XX XX XX HH HX II JJ XX XX XX |
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Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 2,854 |
Words | 645 |
Stanzas | 25 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2 |
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