Bible story belowdecks.the prophet Jonah.



Picking Up Pieces

Jonah story as told in a storm to settle the boys.
on April 27, 2024

 



I tell ye boys

Storm up dere is a howling.
Your next shift on deck
Forty five minutes.
Terrified huh?
Well listen will ye
To that Jonah account.
God’s prophet.
Go to villainous Ninevah.
Preach repentance.
You gotta be kidding Boss.
They’re a horrible bunch.
Took a ship opposite direction.
Outrun God?
His plans?
Not a chance chicken -shit.
Storm rises up. Real bad one.
Superstitious mates toss out
The ornery prophet.
Swallowed up whole
By a stinking whale.
Three days in cramped muck.
Spat out on some beach.
Repentance returned
The Dead.
Don’t mess with the Lord.
His will and pointing Finger.
P.S. Ninevah heard him preach
Got turned around.
God’s mercy handed out.
Saved. Whole bunch of folks
And their critters too.
That’s the Tale
Man and whale.
(Returning Billy to his squeeze box.
Billows a-singing.
Ever so sweet.
Little buttons scampering.)

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Written on April 27, 2024

Submitted by dougb.72572 on April 27, 2024

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a captivating and engaging retelling of the prophet Jonah's story! The vivid descriptions and lively storytelling really drew me in and kept me entertained throughout the poem. The use of colloquial language added a unique and entertaining twist to the classic biblical tale.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to make sure there is a clear structure or flow to the poem. Some parts of the poem felt a bit disconnected or disjointed, so creating a smoother transition between different parts of the story could help enhance the overall readability and impact of the poem.

    Overall, "Picking Up Pieces" is a wonderful and imaginative interpretation of the Jonah story, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great work and continue to infuse your unique voice and creativity into your writing!
     
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