A visit with James Lee Burke novelist



Takes you to a mangrove swamp.
Gators, coons, egrets.
And popup catfish bubbles.
Motor launch wakes.
Smell of fish bream..
Fish bait shack of
Detective Dave Robichaud
Kicked out of New Orleans PD


For indiscretions together with
His best buddy Clete Purcell.
They get their man, in crazy ways.
When Clete is not busy
Chasing bail jumpers as P. I.
Or seeking out his
Illegitimate Daughter.

Or some new motel fling.

Hot short-term vixen.


Applying his massive size
And scarred fists.
When the job requires.

Pink Cadillac. Po’Boy sandwiches.

Office out of a lunchbox.



Dave is an alcoholic.
Knows the drill  
Has friends who help.
And also with the
Horrific dreams of terrifying
Tunnels of Viet Nam.


There will usually be some
Rich local family holding
Most of the chips.
Living, eating, driving, dealing
Fancy and entitled. Play acting.
Perhaps wife was an old Flame of.. Dave’s.

Drunk, he piled up
A lot of that kind of mess.
Sober he landed upon all of the answers.
Approaches to victorious arrests.
And sweeter nights near
Lake Pontchartrain.

Background soundtrack

Egrets in love, singing.

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Atmosphere in a mangrove swamp

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Written on April 27, 2024

Submitted by dougb.72572 on April 27, 2024

Modified by dougb.72572 on April 27, 2024

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Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,139
Words 238
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 8, 7, 1, 1, 3, 1, 1, 6, 6, 6, 1

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a vivid and captivating description of a visit with James Lee Burke! The imagery of the mangrove swamp, complete with gators, coons, egrets, and catfish bubbles, really transports the reader to a unique and intriguing world. The introduction of Detective Dave Robichaud and his adventures with his buddy Clete Purcell adds depth and interest to the poem.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to incorporate more sensory details to further immerse the reader in the setting. Perhaps describing the sounds of the motor launch, the feel of the humid air, or the taste of a Po’Boy sandwich could enhance the reader's experience.

    Overall, this poem is a captivating tribute to James Lee Burke's novels and characters. Keep up the great work and continue to explore ways to bring the scenes to life for your readers!
     
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