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Lamb

Date Written: September 8, 2017
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Lamb

 

A delicate soul

Within a lump of wool

With thrilling surge

So intense was my urge

To cuddle it, to hug it

To lift it with jerk delicate

The tender soul delicate

Kiss planted spread pure joy

Babbling words heart could enjoy

Tiny body with its movements rhythmic

Legs moving with energy cosmic

Soul thy form tiny

Delighted sighs many

Soul what shall I call thee

You are cute, surprise to me

8 comments on “Lamb”

  1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     September 8, 2017

    Extremely sorry for video failure !

  2. comnpkpillai     September 8, 2017

    This poem has a feeling of the good shepherd’s sheep. It describes the white anima in the field one of peace and virgin greenness

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     September 9, 2017

      Thanks so kindly for your beautiful review.

  3. Jawahar Gupta     September 8, 2017

    I LOVE YOUR POTENTIAL MIND in this line
    you are cute, a surprise to me
    nice piece of Faith and Trust,
    I love both cute soft lamb and my Lord Jesus,
    Well done, Subhash, Namaste
    ~~~~~Jawahar Gupta~~~

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     September 9, 2017

      Thanks a million Jawahar for your excellent review and encouraging words.!!

  4. Sonia Crt     September 9, 2017

    very nice poem
    nice to see you in this new poetry world

    1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     September 9, 2017

      Thanks a million Sonia for your beautiful comment.

      1. Subhashchandra B Adhav     September 9, 2017

        Pleasure to see you on this new edition of the site !!

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