Analysis of Pleasure and pains of love
My selfish love 1999 (Kigoma)
My love is selfish, she cares of herself
What gives me pleasure, gives her pain
What gives her pain, gives me pleasure
With all those differences, still embark on one's back
Who are we?.
As long as the road is, as thin as the heaven way is
The survival of our relationship, the sun eclipse with shinning moon
The camel can pass needle's hole, this is how our relationship is
We love each other, we have neither happy nor peace in our hearts
Who are we?.
What if someone comes, in between our hearts
Blood will be shed?, Or our love will lead ?
War will erupt?, with all kind of chaos
An ocean of tears will be shed?, Brutality of each kinds
or we'll sing the song of patriotism?, with the promise we had
We are the sons of the same land, we should learn torelance
Who are we?.
That our love will last forever, but we should solve the difference
Caring is sharing, your pain my pleasure
My pain your pleasure, les exchange it all
I suffer for your pleasure, you enjoy my pain
You suffer for my pleasure, I enjoy your pain
Our love now will last forever , ohh my love I love you
melodious songs the bush will sing, the birds will dance
we will die having pleasure, this is how we are.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111011101 11110101 11011110 1111000101111 111 11101111101011 00101100100101111 0101111111100101 11110111010110101 111 1111001101 1111110111 1101111110 110111110100111 1110111000101011 110110111111 111 11011101011110100 1011011110 1111010111 110111010111 110111010111 101111010111111 0100101110111 111101011111 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,160 |
Words | 226 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 25 |
Lines Amount | 25 |
Letters per line (avg) | 37 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 918 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 229 |
About this poem
The poem is about a man who is in love with her girlfriend but do not get what he wants at time because his girlfriend get some pain to fullfill her boyfriend's pleasure, it can also be reffered to a nation with poor people in Africa with leaders who are selfish and do take the pains of the poor people to satisfy their needs. The main theme is that, all should enjoy the pleasure through every one's pain and not only one enjoy through other's pains. Share the pains and pleasure for the benefi
Written on May 14, 2021
Submitted by mohamedmudaki on July 14, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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