Analysis of Pleasure and pains of love

My selfish love 1999 (Kigoma)



My love is selfish, she cares of herself
What gives me pleasure, gives her pain
What gives her pain, gives me pleasure
With all those differences, still embark on one's back
Who are we?.
As long as the road is, as thin as the heaven way is
The survival of our relationship, the sun eclipse with shinning moon
The camel can pass needle's hole, this is how our relationship is
We love each other, we have neither happy nor peace in our hearts
Who are we?.
What if someone comes, in between our hearts
Blood will be shed?, Or our love will lead ?
War will erupt?, with all kind of chaos
An ocean of tears will be shed?, Brutality of each kinds
 or we'll sing the song of patriotism?, with the promise we had
We are the sons of the same land, we should learn torelance
Who are we?.
That our love will last forever, but we should solve the difference
Caring is sharing, your pain my pleasure
My pain your pleasure, les exchange it all
I suffer for your pleasure, you enjoy my pain
You suffer for my pleasure, I enjoy your pain
Our love now will last forever , ohh my love I love you
melodious songs the  bush will sing, the birds will dance
we will die having pleasure, this is how we are.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,160
Words 226
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 918
Words per stanza (avg) 229

About this poem

The poem is about a man who is in love with her girlfriend but do not get what he wants at time because his girlfriend get some pain to fullfill her boyfriend's pleasure, it can also be reffered to a nation with poor people in Africa with leaders who are selfish and do take the pains of the poor people to satisfy their needs. The main theme is that, all should enjoy the pleasure through every one's pain and not only one enjoy through other's pains. Share the pains and pleasure for the benefi

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Written on May 14, 2021

Submitted by mohamedmudaki on July 14, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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My selfish love

My selfish love describe the The two lovers who can not separate from the relationship despite of a troublesome relationship, but at the end agree to ensdure every one's pain for the benefits and pleasure of all at different times more…

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