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Rooted

Ludy Bührs

With his caring fingers reaching out to mine
he’s made his touch known to my fingertips.
My eyes closed I recall -over the wine and dine-
how it felt to then finally kiss his cautious lips.

Sharing food, thoughts, showers and the bed,
with him, it has been special in every good way.
Never has time that I spent kept stronger its play
in memories than the intimate days we’ve had.  

Rooted like ancient iron wood he’s in my heart,
a strong nested closeness that forever stays felt.
As long as I live, he will always be there.

Even as life’s unruly curling keeps us apart,
those rare precious moments will be vividly held.
He’s with me now and everywhere.
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Submitted by ludy_b on August 13, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB XCCX DXE DXE
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 651
Words 120
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 3
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Ludy Bührs

 · Amsterdam

The topics she writes about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles she applies. As a Dutch translator and poet, having lived in Cambodia's capital city Phnom Penh for 2.5 years, in 2008 she published "Op de ruïnes van een rijk" (On the Ruins of an Empire) ISBN 978-90-8834-483-1 with 60 poems based on her experiences there. In 2007 she received a Certificate of Accomplishment as one of The Best Poems and Poets of 2007 issued by poetry.com and the International Library of Poetry for her poem Choked Truth, her own translation of "Verstikte waarheid", one of the poems in the book. Born in 1956, she still works as an independent translator, translating from English into Dutch. more…

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9 Comments
  • alanswansea18
    alanswansea18
    You always do great work,
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • karlcfolkes
    karlcfolkes
    Thanks, Ludy. Her husband, whom she met as a nurse in Scotland, was a Swiss neurosurgeon with his medical practice in Butte, Montana, where he is memorialized.
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • yelskwah
    yelskwah
    Rooted is a beautifully introspective poem that captures the essence of a love that remains grounded in the speaker’s heart. Using natural metaphors and rich sensory imagery, the poem speaks to the power of memory and love that stays vivid and tangible despite the passing of time or distance. The simplicity and depth of Rooted create a lasting impression of connection and resilience. 
    LikeReply 11 month ago
    • ludy_b
      ludy_b
      Thank you very much for this comment!
      LikeReply1 month ago
  • mfortney2538
    mfortney2538
    I really enjoy this poem
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • StRhaiven
    StRhaiven
    “Rooted” is a beautifully crafted poem that successfully conveys the complexities of love, intimacy, and memory. Its strength lies in the effective use of imagery, emotional resonance, and relatable themes. Bührs captures the essence of a deep connection while acknowledging the challenges that can arise in relationships. The poem’s musicality and warmth make it an engaging and heartfelt read.

    In summary, this piece eloquently illustrates the idea that love, while rooted in shared experiences, remains a profound and abiding presence in one’s life, regardless of physical separation.     
    LikeReply 11 month ago
    • ludy_b
      ludy_b
      Thank you for this very nice comment!
      LikeReply1 month ago
  • Htrout24
    Htrout24
    Very nice
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • karlcfolkes
    karlcfolkes
    This poem aptly captures the sentiments of a sister of mine who lost her beloved husband to illness and now memorializes the memories she shared with him.
    LikeReply 11 month ago
    • ludy_b
      ludy_b
      My deeply meant condolances for your sister!
      LikeReply1 month ago
  • elizabethd.39577
    elizabethd.39577
    that was very beautiful, thanks for sharing
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • Abbykesington
    Abbykesington
    "Rooted like ancient iron wood he’s in my heart." Such strong bond. Thank you for sharing this poem.
    LikeReply 15 months ago

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