Analysis of what am I?

Renfred Dilzem P. Buendia 2003 (Davao city)



No words are expressed when I come, eyes become gloomy, sunny days as it seems becomes rainy, a fullness beautiful day becomes a day of emptiness.

My presence changes everything in a split second, a day where everyone will think it will never end. In this world where nothing is certain, only I exist in the concept of certainty.

I am everywhere, I wander deep in the seas or as high as the skies, I travel through roads, I choose no one to visit either the Youngs or the old, I see everyone, I may be at your side or in your behind.

I was a result of a mistake from a bite of a fruit. I was never meant to be, never supposed to be, other people fear me and others accept me, I am the bad news mostly but beautifully despite all this I bring good news; that I am not the end.


Scheme X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 11101111101101011110110010100101011100 1101010001100111011111010111101101010100101100 111011010011111011101111111101001101111011111110101 11001100110110111101111001111010110100111101110110001111111111101
Characters 781
Words 162
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 150
Words per line (avg) 39
Letters per stanza (avg) 150
Words per stanza (avg) 39

About this poem

The theme of this poem was the theme of the poem writing contest that I joined in 2019, it was my first time joining a poem contest. Though I did not won I was the 3rd runner up, I have so many regrets during the competition but its fine that was my first time. So I decided to write about that theme again so enjoy guessing what it is.

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Written on November 10, 2021

Submitted by renfredd_buendia on November 09, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Renfred Dilzem P. Buendia

Im a Filipino, currently a student of BS Pharmacy. I wrote poems for fun and for other personal reasons. I also like spoken poetry. more…

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