Analysis of Back Then



Several years back, I was given a chance.
To organize teams with a different touch. Attitudes and schedule, it was really tough.

Varying strength, skills and abilities.
Different gender, beliefs and maturity.
Volatile member, time and emergencies.

Receiving requirements, requests and stories
Planning objectives, sprints and activities
Helping members, friends and strangers.

Solve their problems, propagate the emblem.
Every boss is a puzzle, different hats I need to juggle.
Every person is a mystery. Scoreboard is the summary.

Complete this, finish that, accomplish those.
Stop this, continue that, start those.
Learn this, gather that, memorize those.

Religiously I document moves, sharing hints, exposing truths.
Fear on the left, courage on the right.
Confused frontliners, comfortable back.

What is the challenge? When it will cast? Where it will hit? How big is the impact?
How many affected? Aren't we dead yet?

Mix and match, are they on a fight?
Bible and spears, shield and staff.
Prayers of healing, loud battlecry.

Building alliance and friendly wars..
Crafting rules, banishing fools.
Hording tomes, enhancing tools.

They said it was just a "game"...
I stopped them and said...

A game of teamwork and complex strategy.
Building organization, executing negotiations.
Focused coordination, meaningful conversations.

Respect on power, death to deserter.
Prove your value to be a member.
No ifs no buts but be a challenger.

Relationships are built. Without any guilt.
Brotherhood is forged, here and abroad.
Mentorship's a need, Leadership a default.

We got wounds and lost some lives.
We despair, we cried while we ate french fries.
Then we stood up and came back, victors full-time.

I lived those lives from a different land.
No fear of judgement because of height.
Focused on the dream and worked as a team.

Following my orders with varying degree.
There were brothers, even moms.
And there were fathers with their sons.

Not from school nor my college life.
I acquired these knowledge, baptism by fire.
Experience is the teacher. They thought I lied.

They say its a waste, they didn't get my taste.
Supports are trash. They were always bashed.
Weak and fragile? Meek and agile!

Blessings to the shaman who told me im valid.
Honor from the wingkin whose leadership is valid.
Glory to the cleric, for lifting teams he really did.

Some may question if these are fiction.
All I can say is "it happened back then".
Seriously, when I was eleven.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1011111001 11011010011001011101 1001100100 100100100100 10010100100 01001001010 10010100100 10101010 111010010 10011010100111110 1001010100110100 0111010101 11010111 11101101 0100110011010101 110110101 01110001 1101011111111111001 11001010111 10111101 1001101 111011 100100101 1011001 110101 1111101 11101 0111010100 1000101000010 100010100010 0111011100 111011010 1111110100 0101101101 10111001 10110001 1110111 1011111111 11110111011 1111101001 111100111 1010101101 100110110001 1010101 01010111 11111101 1010110100110 010010101111 11101110111 01111011 10101010 101010111110 10101110110 10101011011101 111011110 1111111011 1000111010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,494
Words 471
Sentences 65
Stanzas 20
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 2, 3, 3, 2, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 57
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

Its a POV of an adult reminiscing is childhood glorious past.

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Written on May 25, 2022

Submitted on May 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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