Analysis of Untitled



We tried to paint Elysium
using brushes made of rust
Our trees bore only acrid fruit
Air suffused with ash and dust

Good intentions marred by bruises
Paradise now spoiled by war
This place; not fit for favored men
Just a coward and his whore

Looking back; contrived connection
Desperation made us bend
but now we've come to realize
ransacked hearts can never mend


Scheme XAXA XBXB XCXC
Poetic Form
Metre 11110100 1010111 101110101 1011101 10101110 101111 11111101 1010011 10101010 010111 1111110 111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 374
Words 75
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted by maree_t on November 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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