Analysis of Bon Voyage



It was a gay sunny day,
& I saw a voyage leaving the port away,
I had a small thought of sailing venice way,
Though,wondered had a little penny left away?

I ran to the voyage saw friend of mine,
Who paid the coût for as he was shine,
Peeping to fish'es,I saw a server who served wine,
Wondered who's that brunette so divine?

Her twinkling,ensured she was not less than a fine bottle of Wine,
I toggled around,saw she slat a glass of Dom Pérignon in my hand,
I wondered why,I was not given the wine?
Her reply said "I entralled her sparkling eyes,"
Which was special because now she is fianćee of mine!


Scheme AAAA BBBB BXBXB
Poetic Form
Metre 1101101 11010100101 11011110101 1101010101 1110101111 1101111111 10111010111 101101101 0111111011011 110111011111011 1101111001 0011110101 1110011111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 630
Words 143
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 154
Words per stanza (avg) 38

About this poem

A man who has no money in his pocket,gets in love with a ship waitress.

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Written on October 10, 2022

Submitted on February 22, 2023

Modified on April 13, 2023

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Jay Kshirsagar

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