Analysis of My demons inside me



Who will save me ?
Who will save us?

People wanted to end me
My father wanted to kill me
Like some savage dog trying to get a meal.
Doctors keep telling me that I will be fine
But they doesn't know my demons like I do.

Having to look in the mirror
Not seeing my own eyes
Screaming yelling to get out of me.
I don't to play there games
I just wish they would get out of my head.
Fear comes and takes over me

Into the night, my demon's come to life.
They are master of deception
I look in the mirror
The stranger inside I tell them to get out of my head.
Then fear comes alive.

They are cutting pieces from me because I won't play there games.
Someone save me from this hell
Lost in my thoughts when my demons come to life.
I see it's just me. No one else to blame.

I'm not well,I wish i could be.
Finally happy with my own life.
 my mental health has got a hold on me.
They will never leave me alone. So I will keep screaming ...

Help, lost in my mind
Is this what's inside me
Someone help me out
I can't do this on my own

All my demons are pushing me
They want to take me
But i still won't let them
So I will keep screaming for help

I'm lost in my thoughts
Then I realized that nothing the same
They want to cut me with no remains
Til have have a breakdown.

Someone help me
I can't breathe
I'm trapped in this fight
When my demons come to life.

They want me to be addicted to there own games.
I can't breathe alone in my cell.
Someone save me from this raging hell.

All I can do is believe in myself
Alone in my mind.
I'm not well I wish I can be happy.
But I know i can't with these demons inside me.
Even though I try to run and hide.
Who will save us?
Who will save them?
Who will save me?

Til then I'm gonna keep screaming for
Help
Lost inside
Losing my mind
I can't escape from my mental health.
 I cant find is myself.
There's no way out of there games.

So I guess what I have left to do.
Is keep on screaming for help
To get out of this hell.
When demons comes to light.
Who will save us?
When demons come to play?
Who will save them?
When demons come to light?
Someone save us!!!

When my demons come to life.


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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,140
Words 501
Sentences 42
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 2, 5, 6, 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3, 8, 7, 9, 1
Lines Amount 70
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 29

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Me fight myself with my mental health

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Written on November 21, 2023

Submitted by amandahancock2020 on November 21, 2023

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