Analysis of Do you love me or do you live me not
Do you like me,
Or do you like me not?
We’re in a relationship,
But it seems like an awkward friendship,
I know you care,
But I can’t see through,
Your ember eyes.
Tell me you love me
But I’m confused,
Where’s the proof,
Or evidence to back this up.
Maybe I’m crazy or
Maybe I’m right.
But my brain swirls
In a thousands emotions
Of pain,
But I still put a smile on.
You don’t spend much time with me,
But you text me lots,
Your always looking at me,
But is it all in mind?
Is there no connection
And is it just dead?
I feel like there is,
Some spark,
But I can’t see through,
My dark brown chocolate eyes.
I through my whole heart out there,
To whoever the fuck wants in it,
But what do you I get in return?
Hatred,
Jealousy,
Sadness.
My heart strains,
Like it’s freezing in pain,
So tell me,
Do you like me?
Or like me not
I understand you want be with your friends,
But you can’t put a time for me on my calendar?
It seems like I’m chore,
Something you check off your list,
And never check again.
So tell me,
Do you love me,
Or do you love me not?
I need to know,
My heart has been thrashed,
Dumped,
Destroyed,
Trashed,
And is on its last life,
About to shut,
And never face the world again.
Should I continue this parade of hell and confusion,
Or should I give up and let it all go?
I need to know,
Do you love me or do you love me not?
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111 111111 000010 111111010 1111 11111 1101 11111 1101 101 11001111 101101 1011 1111 0010010 11 1111011 1111111 11111 111011 111101 111010 01111 11111 11 11111 111101 1111111 101001101 111111001 10 100 10 111 111001 111 1111 1111 101111111 1111011111100 11111 1011111 010101 111 1111 111111 1111 11111 1 01 1 011111 0111 01010101 11010101110010 1111101111 1111 1111111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,394 |
Words | 328 |
Sentences | 18 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 58 |
Lines Amount | 58 |
Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 1,004 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 276 |
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