Analysis of Yearning in Grief



Muffled echoes of your voice,
Fall shy of my ear’s drum,
While your cold flesh,
Remains just out of reach,

I’m dehydrated and thirsting…
Thirsting for the experience of you,
But it remains forever locked-inside
My ward I keep of our memories.

Your presence seems so near…
That my hair fibers start raising,
My nerve cells start jumping,
But it fails to create the cascade I crave.

What’s left of your essence is fading,
So, with a mouth full left to say,
I’m dehydrating and thirsting,
Unable to swallow your memory.


Scheme XXXX AXXX XAAX AXAX
Poetic Form
Metre 1010111 111111 1111 011111 1010001 110010011 1101010101 1111110100 110111 11110110 111110 11110100111 011110110 11011111 1101 0101101100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 532
Words 107
Sentences 3
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 101
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Written on January 19, 2024

Submitted by FallingAwake on January 19, 2024

Modified by FallingAwake on January 20, 2024

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