Analysis of Silver and Burgundy



Silver like a medallion
But this isn’t a prize
Burgundy roses fall
Falling falling falling

Delicate ice breaks easily
Lights sounds people
Rose thorns out of place
You are out of place

Falling falling falling
Black soot hiding reality
It’s not ready
It won’t desist

Silver makes it
Is it a problem?
An addiction
To burgundy

Flooding valleys under a red sunset
It looks almost memorising
Not to them though
Not to them


Scheme axxB cxdd Bccx xeac xbxe
Poetic Form
Metre 1010010 11101 100101 101010 10011100 1110 11111 11111 101010 111010 1110 1101 1011 11010 1010 1100 101010011 1111 1111 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 438
Words 89
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 68
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

This poem is based on my personal experiences, put into a subtle tone.

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Written on March 27, 2024

Submitted by esme.walker on March 27, 2024

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