Analysis of Beneath the Maple Tree

Doug Haberman 1959 (Albuquerque, NM)



When I was growing up
I had a dog named Max
He loved to lick my face
And follow in my tracks

One day he chased a squirrel
That ran across the road
A truck came driving by
And never even slowed

Max ended up so maimed
We set his spirit free
And I buried Max’s ashes
Beneath the maple tree

A woman made me smile
I fell in love with her
The day that she said yes
My vision was a blur

She loved my old hometown
And walks along the creek
When the diagnosis came
The tears flowed down our cheeks

The cancer won its fight
Right after I agreed
To bury my wife’s ashes
Beneath the maple tree

I’ve never loved again
Her memory means too much
I spend the lonely nights
Aching for her touch

I dedicate my days
Working at a home
I want the old folks there
Not to feel alone

And when my time has come
A time we all foresee
They’ve sworn to place my ashes
Beneath the maple tree


Scheme xaxa xbxb xcdC xexe xxxx xxdC xfxf xxxx xcdC
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 110111 111111 010011 1111010 110101 011101 010101 110111 111101 0110110 010101 010111 110110 011111 110101 11111 010101 100101 0111101 010111 110101 1101110 010101 110101 0100111 110101 10101 11011 10101 110111 11101 011111 011101 1111110 010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 890
Words 190
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 76
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

A poem about life and love and loss.

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Written on April 16, 2024

Submitted by DougHaberman on April 16, 2024

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Doug Haberman

Retired high school humanities teacher who loves to write song lyrics. Now trying my hand at poetry writing. more…

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