Analysis of This God Is A Liar



There has to be a place better then this, together
We are all suffering here, forever
My God could not let this evil exist, never
He is a brainiac, clever
Straight soldier, warrior
Redemption, closure
Justice, my good luck clover
A pure man leading us all
Real even in all of his flaws
A kingdom where all of us are equal
Children taught with kindness
Not cruelty and fear
Woman are neither above or below, humanity
Men own no slaves, no one is worth less
Since the beginning of time, lies
Oppressed from the start
Robbed of our real history
This cannot be God's world
This has to be hell
Light and dark brings peace
If it is all light they destroy us
If it is all dark we are already dead

ALK
Sunshine


Scheme AAAAAAAXXXBXCXXXCXXXBX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111011011010 1111001010 111111100110 110110 110100 01010 1011110 0111011 11001111 0101111110 101110 11001 10110011010100 111111111 10010111 01101 11101100 110111 11111 10111 111111011 11111110101 1 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 703
Words 135
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 22, 2
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 279
Words per stanza (avg) 67
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Written on January 25, 2023

Submitted by amandak on May 18, 2024

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