Analysis of Daisy



Daisy my sweet Daisy
in my garden you do grow
Your varied seeds
sprinkled on the ground rise up
some planted row by row

Your colors amaze
even cause quite a craze
Happy within my garden
you grow so tall or
choose to stay petite and small

Well known around the world
a spring and summer delight
From childhood dreams
to floral wedding streams
my Daisies shine so bright

When darkness threatens
a timid soul
weary of the struggle
And pain begins to
overthrow

There you are your face
so clear of obscure insensibilities
Glowing happily under the sun
your roots down deep
in stability


Scheme ABXXB CCDXX XEFFE XXXXB XADXA
Poetic Form
Metre 101110 0110111 1101 1010111 110111 11001 101101 1001110 11111 1110101 110101 0101001 111 110101 110111 11010 0101 101010 01011 10 11111 111011 101001001 1111 00100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 600
Words 124
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

Inspired by the beautiful Daisies in my garden.

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Written on March 28, 2024

Submitted by ami.oferris on May 27, 2024

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Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris lives in Southport, NC. She is a published poet in Cameron Art Museum’s Writers Respond to Art Program and awarded the Certificate of Completion for completing the 2021 - 24 Hour Poetry Marathon. Her poem Wheels was chosen and published in the 2021 - 24 Hour Poetry Marathon Anthology. Her poem The Date has been chosen for publication in the 2022 - 24 Hour Poetry Marathon Anthology. She is a published author in Whisper’s & Echoes, an on-line literary magazine and in 50 Give or Take by Vine Leaves Press for her 50 word stories, Love, The Wedding and The Sleep Doctor. Also in Visual Verse with her poem Mother Earth. Ami is honored to have been published in Spillwords for her poem concerning current events, I Am Not A Man. Ami writes flash fiction, short stories, creative non-fiction and fiction as well as poetry. Her short story, Conversations With My Neighbor is published in Trouble, by Daniel Boone Publishing. Ami received Honorable Mention in Tales from the Moonlit Path 2021 their Halloween Issue, Abandoned Places Halloween Challenge, for her short story, Abandoned Memories. She has been published in Whispers and Echoes as follows - Rat-a-Tat-Tat-Tat - Wednesday 4th May 2022 Early Tulips - Wednesday 11th May 2022 Flying High - Wednesday 18th May 2022 She is currently working on her first action/adventure/paranormal romance novel. Ami is a member of NCWN (North Carolina Writer’s Network) and WFWN (Women’s Fiction Writer’s Network). She is a contributing member of several local writers groups including The Wilmington Write To Publish Group, Heron Clan Poetry, Women Writer’s Group and Living Poetry. Ami is known to her closest friends and relatives as Gypsie. more…

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