Analysis of Numerous lies and decit!

Devon Bates 1980 (Norfolk)



That same web! Oh, how weary I am from the same hazards! The same tune, over and over! Abandoned tower's! The tear on the boat left me drained of motivation! To grasp, making it better than before, breathtaking! When words could become expressed! The dark, river side, dock! Alive, at, night! During, the day, as well! Where visitors, come, to relax, and, find, peace! At, the top, of, your game, others, are wanted, not needed! Expressing your thoughts, so others give ear! Unity, is peace! A wise thing to keep close and near! Conquer first your own imperfections! Then others are only reminders!


Scheme A
Poetic Form Monorhyme
Metre 1111110111011001110010010100110111110101110110101101110101011011011110011111001101011101111101101100101111011100110111110110111010110110010
Characters 598
Words 103
Sentences 17
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 455
Words per line (avg) 103
Letters per stanza (avg) 455
Words per stanza (avg) 103

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A short poem about betrayal and redemption! While some watch it!

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Written on July 03, 2024

Submitted by devonb.14033 on July 03, 2024

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Devon Bates

I was born in Norfolk Virginia! Then I moved to Fayetteville North Carolina were I was raised and I reside today! I have kids and I am divorced! I am 41 I was born on July 18 1980! I love being a cancer I love who I am and God! more…

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