Analysis of Kathy Valentine



The 70’s, the Texas heat
Kema Pasadena Galveston Beach
Snapshots of a young life lived so long ago
Triggered by a sound a smell a thought, who knows

Taken back to a specific time and place
I’m in elementary school no more than 7 or 8
Block by block, stop after stop
The kids single file step down and off

The school bus lurches forward,
A large thump, then screams
The driver ran over a young girl
A horrible accident, how can this be?

Some cry as we wait wondering, who and why?
I exit the bus as blood stains the road
A sheriff’ drapes his coat covering
Somebody’s daughter, someone I know

She left this world, but she never left me
Her shocking death is burnt into my memory
Such a short life and not enough time
For sweet little Kathy Valentine


Scheme XXAX XXXX XXXB XXXA BBXX
Poetic Form
Metre 010101 10101001 1101111101 10101010111 10110010101 1001011111 1111101 011011101 0111010 01111 010110011 01001001111 11111100101 1100111101 010111100 110111 1111111011 010111011100 101101011 11101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 763
Words 152
Sentences 3
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 118
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

This poem is about a young girl's death that I went to school with. She is with me always.

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Written on August 02, 2024

Submitted by lisacampbell29 on August 02, 2024

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Lisa Campbell

 · 1966 · Ohio

I am 56 years old. I love to write poems, short stories and lyrics. more…

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