Analysis of A While Ago by russ mckay



It's seldom now that you remember
Whether years ago or last December
I hope that somewhere in your mind
Are memories that you've left behind

Those happy thoughts we made together
A vow of love to last forever
Sharing good times with the bad
Vowing now to NOT be sad

Two days ago you said my name
Yet no two days are quite the same
But today you made it all worthwhile
When I walked in and saw you smile

YOU are the YES in yesterday


Scheme AABB AACC DDEE X
Poetic Form
Metre 110111010 1010111010 1111011 110011101 110111010 011111010 1011101 1011111 11011111 11111101 101111111 11100111 1101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 434
Words 89
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

A friend's wife had Alzheimers and I wrote this after a comment that he made.

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Written on June 20, 2019

Submitted by RussMcKay on October 19, 2024

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Russ McKay

 · 1942 · Baltimore

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