Analysis of A Flame of Love Aloft a Mountain Peak



She stands engraved in memory as a flame.

Her friendly spirit soaring on a hilltop high.

Immensely shining bright, aloft a mountain top.

Kindling with her brethren in celestial realms.

Hovering now as a guardian angel of us all.

Above the stratosphere, in residence with her kinsfolk.

Discerning what our hearts and souls reveal.

A twinkle in her gentle eyes tells us it’s all right.

Let tears not hinder then what the heart expresses.

A love for one who brightened many lives.

Let love forever glorify that shining flame aloft the mountain peak.


Scheme X X X X X A X X X X A
Poetic Form
Metre 11010100101 01010101011 010101010101 10101000101 10011010010111 010100100101 01011010101 0100010111111 111101101010 0111110101 11010101101010101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 560
Words 115
Sentences 11
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 40
Words per stanza (avg) 8

About this poem

This acrostic poem memorializes the life of educator, Shikha Dalal, who served as a Bilingual Resource Specialist at the Asian Languages Bilingual Education Technical Assistance Center (ALBETAC) of the New York State Education Department in New York. This poem highlights her first and last names which together symbolize the pleasant glow of a gentle flame shining perpetually aloft a mountain top.

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Written on November 04, 2024

Submitted by karlcfolkes on November 04, 2024

Modified by karlcfolkes on November 04, 2024

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Karl Constantine FOLKES

 · 1935 · Portland

Retired educator of Jamaican ancestry with a lifelong interest in composing poetry dealing particularly with the metaphysics of self-reflection; completed a dissertation in Children’s Literature in 1991 at New York University entitled: An Analysis of Wilhelm Grimm’s ‘Liebe Mili’ (translated into English as “Dear Mili”), Employing Von Franzian Methodological Processes of Analytical Psychology. The subject of the dissertation concerned the process of Individuation. more…

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