Analysis of Atoning procurements
Disheveled the beach
Presence leeched
To reach the stone
Found prone
Ache boned
Mind could roam, but tightly hone
A brief moment hound
Allowing respite
From desperate
A pose, subtle seldom chose
The waves arose
As spots carried on clothes
Parts of whole
However droll
Drab soul
Tides eventual lull
Moment stole
Seeming, culled
Scold enfolded in emboldened blanketed cheer drear-endeared, welcomed. Evenly, bemure. Reassures, slightly deterred. Demurring. Lucid stirring not very reoccuring. Purring gentle change, arranged sleepingly well. Quelling swelling emotionally mourn bourne. Dispelling the yelling gait off kilter rate of judgmental rebelling. Comfort resorting imagined, fortitudes reverie.
Waves every colors sea, pouncing in reprieve, seive. Feelings leave and eyes fall, dolling the appaling with lent hands earnest remorse. Terse curse muddling mirrored puddling made reflective in skies eyes whose beauties always tied to humanities wide coalescence…
Scheme | ABCCBCBBBDDDEEEFEBGH |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 01001 101 1101 11 11 1111101 01101 01010 110 0110101 0101 111011 111 101 11 101001 101 101 1100101001101101001011001010101011011010101111010010011010010111011010010100100101100 1100101100011101011101111100111100101101001111011101001010 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 967 |
Words | 139 |
Sentences | 12 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 20 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 40 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 804 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 138 |
About this poem
Written 2/24/24 Atoning thoughts towards my Mom, as I walk on the beach on my PNW Island, turned to poem.
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