Analysis of pretending for the sake of others



I sit here, and pretend that I can float.
I always keep my back against the wall.
I hide my tears in a secret room no one can see.
I'm afraid if they know, then they will flee.
I pretend I can float because I know that I'm falling.
I can't fly.
So I try to be stuck somewhere in between.
My back is against the wall so nothing sneaks up from behind.
I hide my treats in a secret room so others don't show me theirs.
I pretend to be happy.
But maybe it's not fully a lie.


Scheme ABCCDEFGHCE
Poetic Form
Metre 1110011111 111110101 1111001011111 1011111111 10111101111110 111 1111111001 111010111011101 1111001011101111 1011110 110111001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 470
Words 99
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 354
Words per stanza (avg) 99
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Submitted on March 15, 2015

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Paige Morgan

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