Analysis of A Poet Strives



I know it's vain you mountains, woods, but still
I strive to write your wild and wondrous hue,
Your rocks and lakes and ever rolling hill,
Gold girded eve or morn immersed in dew.

For days and days and nights and nights I've toiled
In solitude and out in sunny field
To put in words your beauty that I'm foiled,
Can't seem to capture you but I'll not yield.

I've often tried to pen the pictured scene,
To write it down with fond and anxious care,
In rhyme to equal nature, forests green
And filled with birds whose songs refresh the air.

My thoughts so full of fevered fancies sweep
From mind to pen, both dry; oh I could weep!


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GG
Poetic Form Shakespearean Sonnet 
Metre 1111110111 1111110101 1101010101 111110101 1101010111 010010101 1101110111 1111011111 1101110101 1111110101 0111010101 0111110101 1111110101 1111111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 614
Words 120
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 122
Words per stanza (avg) 30
Font size:
 

Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

37 sec read
1

Discuss this Jerry Jax poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "A Poet Strives" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2025. Web. 5 Jan. 2025. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/64683/a-poet-strives>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    January 2025

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    26
    days
    21
    hours
    39
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    And miles to go before I _______
    A end
    B dream
    C rest
    D sleep