Analysis of Companionship
(continued from forlorn, so u must read FORLORN first)
My soul was departing,
I'd lost all heat,
Death placed its icy hands on me,
I had cold hands,ears and feet.
Everything to me was numb,
I knew I was finally dead,
But who knew my life had just begun,
I felt a paranormal warmth in my head.
"Now no more sufferings for you,
I'm always there I promise.
I know we can make through,
and life will be better I promise."
My body was wet,
Yeah! I was gaining heat.
I felt loving warmth inside,
My ears cherished that sound so sweet.
My stopped respirations,
I felt had STARTED,
I was taking short breaths,
I was glad I wasn't departed.
Unlike previous breaths,
I was breathing fresh air.
That poison in it was over,
I constantly tasted beauty through air.
My eyes were still closed,
But I felt every euphoric mood,
My feet became warmer,
and finally my life was becoming good
There was silence again,
But I loved it this time.
This silence did not have pain,
It was bringing back my good time.
In that sound of silence,
Suddenly I heard something,
was it it a thump,
or did i hear someone sing?
I felt a jerk through my body,
I turned on my back,
I laid calmly on the ground,
And i heard the sound back.
I smiled calmly,
My eyes still shut very neat.
I couldn't believe my senses,
It was the first time I heard my heart beat!
I did not wish to move,
Did not want anything to see,
Just wanted to enjoy every moment,
Scared as I was for a dream it can be
I kept smiling,
Until someone grabbed my hand,
Placed it on my chest,
now I felt my heart and not the land.
I felt somebody kiss me,
and made my lips wet,
My emotions became intense,
and I was covered in sweat.
I trusted someone and opened my eyes,
Opened them slowly to see,
And I saw a beautiful girl,
Who became an inseparable part of me.
-Ajinkya Bhasme
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 0101011111011 111010 1111 11110111 111101 101111 11111001 111111101 11000101011 11110011 111110 111111 011110110 11011 111101 1110101 11101111 111 11110 111011 111110010 011001 111011 11001110 1100101011 11011 1111000101 110110 01001110101 111001 111111 1101111 11101111 011110 1001110 11101 111111 11011110 11111 1110101 011011 1110 1111101 11001110 1101111111 111111 1111011 11010110010 1111101111 1110 011111 11111 111110101 111011 01111 10100101 0111001 110101011 1011011 01101001 101101000111 11 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,745 |
Words | 352 |
Sentences | 20 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 62 |
Lines Amount | 62 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 1,387 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 350 |
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Submitted on March 19, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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