Analysis of Violet Moore and Bert Moore
He thinks her little feet should pass
Where dandelions star thickly grass;
Her hands should lift in sunlit air
Sea-wind should tangle up her hair.
Green leaves, he says, have never heard
A sweeter ragtime mockingbird,
Nor has the moon-man ever seen,
Or man in the spotlight, leering green,
Such a beguiling, smiling queen.
Her eyes, he says, are stars at dusk,
Her mouth as sweet as red-rose musk;
And when she dances his young heart swells
With flutes and viols and silver bells;
His brain is dizzy, his senses swim,
When she slants her ragtime eyes at him. . .
Moonlight shadows, he bids her see,
Move no more silently than she.
It was this way, he says, she came,
Into his cold heart, bearing flame.
And now that his heart is all on fire
Will she refuse his heart's desire?-
And O! has the Moon Man ever seen
(Or the spotlight devil, leering green)
A sweeter shadow upon a screen?
Scheme | AABBCCDDD EEFFGG HHIIJJDDD |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11010111 11001101 0111011 11110101 11111101 010110 11011101 1100111 10010101 01111111 01111111 011101111 11010101 111101101 11101111 111101 11110011 11111111 01111101 0111111110 110111010 011011101 1011011 01010101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 889 |
Words | 163 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 9, 6, 9 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 228 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 54 |
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Submitted on May 13, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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