Analysis of Lonely Days



I work so alone.
I been treated like stone.
And I want it to stop.
But it wont stop.
It wont stop.
And, Why wont it work.
Please.Help me...
If you dont.
Then I will put you in the hall of shame
and not hall of fame.
Oh,
Better curse me
Better even spike me..
But even better if you just put a blade in me.
Yea...


Scheme AABBBCDEFFGDDDH
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 111011 011111 1111 111 01111 11 111 1111100111 01111 1 1011 101011 1101011110101 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 298
Words 68
Sentences 14
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 226
Words per stanza (avg) 67
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Submitted on June 17, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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