Analysis of Tribute x Candy



My dear, you are of divine work, among the few of God's selection,
He chose to personify perfection
Let this simple man lend a touch of heated passion through convection
A kiss of your vibrant, flourescent pink lips would be the equivalent of consumption of a confection.

Let me dissect the morality of my lesson, take a seat my student
And don't worry about comprehension of it just yet
These are the afterhours of my classroom, we have all the time we need
You are a wise woman, studious and extravagant
You'll do well as my courses rise in level
It's hard to hold back my intense sexual desire to a woman so elegant
Who shines like the brightest, rarest gem inside a bezel

I must retract
Just a bit back
I tend to get carried away...
There's only so much I can say
Before I flow with my instinctive emotion
Trey Songz made "Dive In", into what you ask? Your ocean
Basking my body in your sea of beauty and affection

Excuse the Professor, my lips grazed this bottle of Remy Martin, I meant to take a sip
I forgot that the next lesson of this progression relationship would be friendship

By: ©William J Dorsey Jr. (Copyright) October 2013


Scheme AAAA BXXBCBC XXDDAAA EE X
Poetic Form
Metre 11111011010111010 111010010 11101101110101010 0111101111100100101010010 1101001001110101110 0110010101111 1101001111110111 11011010000100 11111101010 1111110110001010101100 1110101010101 1101 1011 11111001 11011111 011111010010 1111001111110 101100111100010 01001011111011010111101 10110110110100101110 110110110010
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,121
Words 210
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 7, 7, 2, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 180
Words per stanza (avg) 42
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Submitted by matiasp.29602 on March 11, 2014

Modified on April 26, 2023

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