Rain



OH Punish me oh faith you.
With your side effects that come with
dealing with you.
I been good to you.
Even listening to each of your words
appreciated every time I heard your voice.
Punish me because I’m to much of me  
beyond the limits of regularity.
Since not we in death than why are we apart.
Every second each sweat energy is counting
nothing you can get back is what we given.
OH Punish me oh faith you.
I took you in absorb blindly in you
Well Thank you for these side effects you put upon on me.

About this poem

A breakup.

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Written on November 20, 2021

Submitted by Surpreme on November 20, 2021

Modified on May 03, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AbaacdeefghAae
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 508
Words 110
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14

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