The Whining Heart



The heart is pounding is pounding with torment like a volcano!
She still grieve the pang of being born as a lassie
To whom should she share her agonize
In front of people who ought to espy her sufferings
When she laugh ,
She try to take away her afflict ,
But......!
The heart breaks under the cover of a chuckle
In the darkness of night
She dig out a person
The heart began to apprise the misery to the orb
By perceiving the twinge story
The slot began to bawl
The rush that came out of the slot ,
Flowed like a gush of blood
After sometimes ,
A soothing aura formed around her , like a
Profound hush felt after heavy rain
She had fallen into a slumber
As dawn arrives
She rise and shine as an original
"Let slip the prior"
Concealing the whining heart
She apt a smirk on her face
For those who have tenderness on her......!

About this poem

This poem refers to the life of a girl. If there is a wound in their mind, they will keep it inside that no one knows. She cries silently throughout the night, and in the morning she re-enacts with a small smile as if she knows nothing. As a story in the story of life.

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Written on July 11, 2022

Submitted by snehashereef3 on July 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKBLMNOPQRSHRTUR
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 834
Words 172
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25

Sneha A

 · 2003 · Kollam

I'm sneha , since 2003. At present I'm a 19 yr old guy who is doing bachelor's in English Literature . My ambition is to become a civil servant . One of my passion is writing . My hobbies are listening to music , eating etc... , Mine is a nuclear family consist of father , mother , brother and me . I started writing before just one year . Books inspired me a lot . I believe one day all my dreams come true. more…

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