Breakups



'Twas the end of the day,
the beginning of summer
the in between of things
lost forever

Hope fell quietly
Surrendering to his will
Closing her eyes
diving into abyss

mountains rose high
separating the two
one walked away
Into the doom

Rivers down the way
Collected the other
she drifted dead
till the end of summer

About this poem

The poem circles around the departure of two lovers where one is hopeful fot new love while the other feels like the world has ended for her.

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Written on September 15, 2022

Submitted by Megs12121 on September 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXB XXXX XXAX ABXB
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 325
Words 67
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

Meghna Singh

 · 1999 · Patna

I am an English graduate, an avid reader and a hopeful writer. more…

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