Just another creek in the night



Somethings are green
Somethings are Blue
While others are too
Some come through
Will others not so much

Seas to blue
grass to green
hissing in the day
crickets at night

Moons to Yellow
Stars to bright
Love to over-rated
hate to bleak
Just another creek in the night.

Death is never noticed
Life is never lived
Christ is all to right
Satin is all to wrong
So what is perfect?

Being right is being wrong
Being to good will get you gone
No one's perfect
No one's to good
No one's to bad
Just another creek in the night.
 
Green too good
Red to bad
You and I are just not right
Life's worth it
Just like you and I

Do we live
Do we Die
I say live
It's just another creek in the night.

About this poem

This poem is one of my newest written poems... Someone asked me to write on based off of random feelings so heres what I came up with

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Written on February 25, 2023

Submitted by dena.lombardo.26 on March 07, 2023

Modified on March 08, 2023

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Scheme abbbx baxc xcdxC xxcef exfdgC dgcxh ihic
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Words 152
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 5, 5, 6, 5, 4

Dena Lombardo

 · 2004 · Mississippi

My name is Dena Lombardo, I am 17 years old. I live in Poplarville Mississippi, and I am suffering from depression. I started writing poems when I was in the 8th grade. I always found that it help me sink into my own world. more…

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